One Single Impression says:
At the suggestion of blogger Noah the Great, we leave you stranded.
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plain white paper
beckons for spill of words
wordsmith stranded
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white sanctuary
enfolds the spirit inside
origami paper
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prison
stone throwers
glass house
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Fractal by Sue
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Tuesday, April 08, 2008
Haiku Trio
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An original take on 'stranded. I love the origami haiku and the visual.
very beautiful!!
I like the wordsmith one, for some strange reason I see a elephant trunk in the fractal
I like 'plain white paper becons for spill of words'
Nicely done!
I like these, but I most especially like the origami haiku. Well done and oh so true!
Writing in Faith: Poems
I love every one of them. If I had to pick guess it would be the first, having felt it.
all so gorgeous...& i am especially drawn to the idea of a 'stranded wordsmith' as a metaphor for writer's block.
I like yours better than mine!
nice nice nice.. that second one is phenomenal... love them all but that second one... damn.....
That third one gave me quite some pause, being so minimalist. But I think it really works.
It's true that the lack of words is frustrating.
..the glass house broken,the prisoner escapes one prison to
enter another.some beings
just never had a 'left'
brain!..so don't let ur pen rest!
I loved every single one of those too much to choose just one. Great work.
These all are so well done; the minimal nature enhances the message.
I love the origami poem: the paper does seem to release a spirit, especially the cranes.
Every line is says so much. Wonderful!
Wonderful my friend. Oh I have been stranded here before.
As always great word play and flowing words.
love-bd
These are all lovely. I especially like the first one. I'm really having to think about the glass house one which is always a good thing.
O the poor wordsmith. How he/she suffers for art. But what exquisite suffering.
Great write!
Gemma
marvelous all three
origami 'ku ... precious
images emerge
It seems to me you may have already visited mine … but just in case ... I’m late to visit because ‘life’ got in the way, but I did publish two ‘week 6’ posts for One Single Impression: Stranded ... one on each of my blogs on Wednesday of last week and I hope you’ll find time to visit. They’re here: Heliocopter Rescue and Polar Bears
Hugs and blessings,
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