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Wednesday, October 15, 2008

The Fall of Dark


first curl of night
in delicate strands

bundles the light
with jaded indolence

a makeshift present
for a daytime lover


Three Word Wednesday prompt words: Delicate, Jaded, Night. Follow the link to see what others have written and to play along with this energetic meme!

Post processed digital photo by Sue


ThomG said...

I really enjoyed your choice of words to fit with 3WW. It's a light little package, but it delivers big.

TC said...

I really enjoyed the line "a makeshift present."

Anonymous said...

Very nice use of the prompt words! I liked the tone of the poem.

Anonymous said...

Thank you for visiting and you did a lot with a few words. Good job!

paisley said...

what a gorgeous verse... i liked the words today..

Linda Jacobs said...

Love the "curl of night" and all of it, really!

gautami tripathy said...

Great first line. Loved the sound of it!

I take the dare!

Anonymous said...

sweet! I like the last line - "present for a daytime lover"

Anonymous said...

that is a beauty... so softly the voice sings..

Melody said...

I was going to say I loved your first line but I actually I loved them all. You said so much with the prompts this week in so few words.