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Friday, December 12, 2008

Joker's Wild

in the space of dark
where the faults
live unfettered

a flinch was dotted
by shrug and pout
one denial frittered

dawn pressed eject
exposed the blemish
as guilt grew a pardon

Michelle at Poefusion Friday 5 offers the following words for today's prompt: blemish, eject, flinch, pout, dot
She never fails to select words that jostle the imagination.



poefusion said...

Another excellent write, Tumblewords. I love how your mind works. It's so intricate. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.

Anonymous said...

this is a great approach to beautiful story...

Anonymous said...

Your way with words is, I'm wordless sometimes, I just love how you combine them, Susan.

Stan Ski said...

The light of day exposes many blemishes - none here!

Dave King said...

For me it was the last verse. Very thought-provoking.

Giggles said...

Beautiful art Sue, rich in color! Words we can all share, lovely!

Hugs Sherrie

paisley said...

in the space of dark
where the faults
live unfettered

i am thinking i am stuck in here,, in this very place right this moment....

Anonymous said...

a flinched was dotted- love that, though I cannot exactly pinpoint the meaning of the whole piece, I do like how it is read and arranged