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Sunday, July 19, 2009

Tanka for Sunday Scribblings


Sunday Scribblings posts with the prompt: Plan.



of mice and...

thin paper raincoat
damped by the topcoat season
sodden tactics shred
and mishandled ribs collapse
beneath the weight of the storm


Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, resized in Irfanview.


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13 comments:

JanePoet ~ JP/deb said...

Great image ... love, love, love "mishandled ribs" !!

xx,
JP/deb

anthonynorth said...

A marvellous storm of words there.

poefusion said...

interesting images in this one Tumblewords. great write. have a nice day.

Marja said...

beneath the weight of the storm
marvellous and such a beautiful image

Stan Ski said...

The life-cycle of many a plan.

Whitesnake said...

How come ya so brilliant at this?

quin browne said...

excellent tumble of words

Americanising Desi said...

whoooshh you blew me away!

The Bigger Plan

indicaspecies said...

The collapse of the mishandled ribs beneath the weight of the storm...I like that!

nonizamboni said...

Truly elegant. . .those mishandled ribs. I'm new to Tanka and I'm glad I was introduced by you :O)

sundaycynce said...

Ah, the way of so many a plan...
but were they "the best laid.."?

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Thin paper raincoat, huh? No wonder the plan failed.

one more believer said...

speechless on this one tw...the weight of a storm...