Pocked - I love it! I was trying to get to that word and it evaded me. I guess I wasn't supposed to use it in my poem. It works and is wonderful in yours.
Heh, nifty comparison... it does look rather like the batter once you've had it on the griddle for a bit. Maybe that's how it formed in the first place... billions upon billions of gallons of batter.
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Pocked - I love it! I was trying to get to that word and it evaded me. I guess I wasn't supposed to use it in my poem. It works and is wonderful in yours.
Many ideas popped into my head when I saw Tess' photo .. pox was the first. Love your Magpie.
Hubble scans. I like that.
hmmm, it actually does look like its ready to be flipped. Nice catch, and a sharp haiku.
Celestial pancakes -- good.
This is wonderful!
Heh, nifty comparison... it does look rather like the batter once you've had it on the griddle for a bit. Maybe that's how it formed in the first place... billions upon billions of gallons of batter.
Sensational juxtaposition of images. Vb
I'll take a couple, and pass the syrup, please..some for Hubbel?
that's a great haiku. love your choice of words. hope all is well your way. have a great night.
excellent haiku and nice original vision
Nice one Tumblewords! Bet those pancakes are tasty too!
wow! liked your imagination.. so out-of-the-box!
cheers,
I'm sitting here with my first cup of coffee and now I want pancakes for breakfast = )... beautiful 'ku and very clever perception of the photo.
~laurie
Admire those that can get a haiku just right in English.
I never met a pancake I didn't like. And I also like this write.
I find it so different and unique. thanks for sharing.
A very clever take indeed.. May I have some please..?
Hugs xx
Pancakes and Hubble! What a great combo.
Exemplary, one of the most distinctive takes on rain in this batch, thus far.
...please pass the syrup....love this one!! :-)
Yum Yum! I'm hungry! Excellent haiku!
Anna :o]
Dear TW: Great imagination! Totally creative!
What mix - cool!
Interesting recipe! :)
cute.
pocketed and puffed....that is exactly what those bubbles look like....blessings...bkm
What a witty haiku. And so true!
Mad Kane
I can taste them from here.
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