disturbed water
bridges one bank
and its greener
grassy other side
brushes
at the chill rain
still the ripples
encroach upon
the early calm
and pushy dancing
circles spin against
the rocky shore
Three Word Wednesday prompt words: disturbed, still and bridge
Abstract watercolor by Sue with rain drops by IrfanView
poetry watercolor
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18 comments:
I do so love the way you use words. :) Wonderful use of the prompt!
I like the visual you get from this well before seeing the watercolor.
Very thought provoking.
I love how you used the prompt and the word picture of the rain disturbing the water. Wonderful painting, too.
"and pushy dancing
circles spin against
the rocky shore"
is such a delicious image!
i can smell the green and hear the water.
While I do like the imagery of this, I love how it sounds when spoken out loud.
lovely!! :)
keep it rolling...
here is my half-baked attempt:
http://thiswholenewworld.blogspot.com/2008/02/immortal-hope.html
take care!
That was lovely!
Wow! I have to read it again - excellent
i agree with Linda. '...pushy dancing circles spin against the rocky shore' is very green, very vivid...Nice picture!
I like your imagery. Always.
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beautifully written
Your word use is incredible -- disturbed water...very nice, very vivid!
agree about the imagery :) There's something about a ripple that is both soothing and disturbing
And thanks for the wonderful comment
Both poem and panting have a surreal connotation and blend quite well. Lovely post, Sue!
"Pushy dancing circles," is so much more than merely dancing circles. Love it.
subtle sounds and images are a beauty... luv stoppin by
I agree with an earlier commenter. I could almost smell the rain and hear it falling.
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