The prompt words for Poefusion's Friday5 are: crow, scud, inflicted, agitation, margin. Thanks for the prompt, Michelle!
cackling crows dropped
shadows ahead of
the scudding clouds,
inflicted agitation,
tiny barn swallows
skip-hopped over those
black doppelgangers,
with no margin for error
5 comments:
i so wanted to incorporate that "no margin for error" in mine when i first saw the words....... but it took off in a whole nother direction....... loved this....
You always leave me so speechless; I never have anything to say.
I guess that's a good thing, because I'd have a lot to say, if I didn't like it.
Oh, yes! Oh, my. And thanks.
I love this poem and its imagery. Its vivid detail is engrossing. You can spin a tale from anything. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.
nice work with this one, Sue. loved it.
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