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Saturday, February 23, 2008

Poem ~ Friday5


The prompt words for Poefusion's Friday5 are: crow, scud, inflicted, agitation, margin. Thanks for the prompt, Michelle!



cackling crows dropped
shadows ahead of
the scudding clouds,
inflicted agitation,

tiny barn swallows
skip-hopped over those
black doppelgangers,
with no margin for error





5 comments:

paisley said...

i so wanted to incorporate that "no margin for error" in mine when i first saw the words....... but it took off in a whole nother direction....... loved this....

noahthegreat said...

You always leave me so speechless; I never have anything to say.

I guess that's a good thing, because I'd have a lot to say, if I didn't like it.

Sandy Carlson said...

Oh, yes! Oh, my. And thanks.

Michelle Johnson said...

I love this poem and its imagery. Its vivid detail is engrossing. You can spin a tale from anything. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.

UL said...

nice work with this one, Sue. loved it.