Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor

Thursday, February 07, 2008

Star-crossed and Coupled

out behind a barn
naked in its muddy field
death six feet away

she curled tight against
shadows from a rounded moon
her breathing shallow

gray and weak she tranced
traced movies of first desire
before that mellow

glow of young lovers
star-crossed and coupled to fate
turned the curve to hate

Totally Optional Prompt: Mystery/Thriller Poem


SweetTalkingGuy said...

Really dark and scary, but you've managed to communicate something here.
Also in the picture, I can see faces, really spooky!
Well done!

anthonynorth said...

That was chilling. It had a real sense of menace.

UL said...

i get the chills,scary and full of mystery.

sister AE said...

sad and spooky too.

paisley said...

dismal cold and dark... mmmm my favorite......

gautami tripathy said...

I like the deep dark thoughts.

And I have tagged you too!
10 to 10

Jo said...

yes, very chilling, painted a bleak picture. Great!

Richard said...

Ooooh. puts me in mind of appalachian murder ballads. "I cried, oh Willie, don't you murder me, I'm not prepared for eternity." Spooky.

Anonymous said...


ronrusso said...

Well done as usual. I love the maturity and obvious craft in your writing.