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Thursday, February 28, 2008

Camera Eyes Two Mice


This Pleiades poem was written in response to the Send a Message prompt from Totally Optional Prompts.

News: Hubble Telescope photographs two spiral galaxies, members of the Coma Cluster, known as The Mice.


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conjunct galaxies whirl
cosmic tails twirl and reach
curl away from Coma
collide once again, then
cluster at the first light ~
collection on the move
crafts a skybound message


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10 comments:

Jo said...

vividly beautiful as always

noahthegreat said...

I love the form, and you used it well.

UL said...

gorgeous...

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah, I like it! All those C's send me into a coma, only joking.
Loved the fractal too!

Yours truly Mason said...

What a picture this left in my mind it makes me want to go outside and stair at the stars fantastic job

julthebewondered said...

...whirl...twirl...curl...and then the collision, eventually into a message. This would be a good "writing" poem for Writer's Digest.

Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely

Linda Jacobs said...

The use of the C's is fun and I love all the rhyme in here, too! whirl, twirl, curl, again, then. And the alliteration of all the L's. there is just so much in here! Love it!

anthonynorth said...

A message in a poem from the universe.
Excellent.

Stan Ski said...

If only it were all visible to the naked eye!