This Pleiades poem was written in response to the Send a Message prompt from Totally Optional Prompts.
News: Hubble Telescope photographs two spiral galaxies, members of the Coma Cluster, known as The Mice.
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conjunct galaxies whirl
cosmic tails twirl and reach
curl away from Coma
collide once again, then
cluster at the first light ~
collection on the move
crafts a skybound message
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fractals
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vividly beautiful as always
I love the form, and you used it well.
gorgeous...
Yeah, I like it! All those C's send me into a coma, only joking.
Loved the fractal too!
What a picture this left in my mind it makes me want to go outside and stair at the stars fantastic job
...whirl...twirl...curl...and then the collision, eventually into a message. This would be a good "writing" poem for Writer's Digest.
lovely
The use of the C's is fun and I love all the rhyme in here, too! whirl, twirl, curl, again, then. And the alliteration of all the L's. there is just so much in here! Love it!
A message in a poem from the universe.
Excellent.
If only it were all visible to the naked eye!
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