Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor

Tuesday, February 05, 2008

At the Gap

borne by chuffing wind
chariots of mad folly

tongue hot air
disguised as loyalty

cut short paradise by
tugging at the reins

infinity turns its back
lets the gods off the hook

Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, Edited in IrfanView


Q said...

Another gift from you!
Thank you.
I shall try Fractal Explorer.
Yours always turn out so beautiful!

Anonymous said...

What an interesting poem!

anthonynorth said...

I love those last two lines. Excellent.

Anonymous said...

There's movement and force in this one. Yes, an interesting poem with a clincher at the end.

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SweetTalkingGuy said...

Wonderfulwords, infinity turns its back lets the gods off the hook again - this is so eternal! Timeless!

Fledgling Poet said...

So much action in these words..and I always love your images you provide with your poetry. Beautiful!

gautami tripathy said...

I like the way it goes. Great picture too!

dancing verses

Nairobi said...

A very nice one...
loved the last 4 lines especially...
keep it up...