borne by chuffing wind
chariots of mad folly
tongue hot air
disguised as loyalty
cut short paradise by
tugging at the reins
infinity turns its back
lets the gods off the hook
Fractal created in Fractal Explorer, Edited in IrfanView
Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Tuesday, February 05, 2008
At the Gap
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8 comments:
Another gift from you!
Thank you.
I shall try Fractal Explorer.
Yours always turn out so beautiful!
Sherry
What an interesting poem!
I love those last two lines. Excellent.
There's movement and force in this one. Yes, an interesting poem with a clincher at the end.
I've was able to add myself as one of your followers as I also have blogs on Blogger, although I don't use them as often as Watermaid.
Carole
Wonderfulwords, infinity turns its back lets the gods off the hook again - this is so eternal! Timeless!
So much action in these words..and I always love your images you provide with your poetry. Beautiful!
I like the way it goes. Great picture too!
dancing verses
A very nice one...
loved the last 4 lines especially...
keep it up...
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