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Wednesday, February 13, 2008

He


A disclaimer: I don't know him, I don't know her - the Three Word Wednesday prompt words popped up, fell out and here they're written in a mild haiku format.


He

seeking slight comfort
imagined his old girlfriend
missing their past

meanwhile

his slight ex-girlfriend
seeking shells on Sanibel
imagined him ~ not





Fractal by Fractal Explorer, resized in IrfanView

13 comments:

pia said...

Love the old girfriend, carefee in Sanibel--and the man still yearning

TC said...

I want to be his ex-girlfriend :)

mariacristina said...

I want to be his slight ex-girlfriend on Sanibel. I enojed this poem! You know how to say so much with just a few lines. Perfect.

Sherry said...

Lovely!!! So lyrical and "perfect" -- I love it when something just "writes" itself, don't you?

Norma said...

This is terrific. I love the Sanibel humor.

Linda Jacobs said...

So clever! Made me long for retirement and beaches!

Truefaith1963 said...

HAHAHA! Nice.

Pam said...

Great job putting us into two people at once-- it all perspective!

By the way, thanks for stopping by my blog.

Heather Kathleen said...

i would like to be seeking shells right about now...
wonderful job again and beautiful artwork. thank you. :)

UL said...

wonderful, Sue, you always do them so well...one remembered and the other forgot, life isnt fair, is it?

gautami tripathy said...

Beautifully put..:D

Leigh Lear said...

Lovely!

LittleWing said...

the fractal was beautiful..don't know if it was the color or the design... i can see it all so clearly a kinda mirrored love...