tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post7602272514131056042..comments2023-07-30T07:30:50.256-07:00Comments on Tumblewords: Once Upon a RainTumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-38521736213264456732008-02-09T12:36:00.000-08:002008-02-09T12:36:00.000-08:00I agree with an earlier commenter. I could almost...I agree with an earlier commenter. I could almost smell the rain and hear it falling.Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-88922001772204335222008-02-08T15:22:00.000-08:002008-02-08T15:22:00.000-08:00subtle sounds and images are a beauty... luv stopp...subtle sounds and images are a beauty... luv stoppin bylittle wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-64084252617532367012008-02-08T07:59:00.000-08:002008-02-08T07:59:00.000-08:00"Pushy dancing circles," is so much more than mere..."Pushy dancing circles," is so much more than merely dancing circles. Love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-757948862856502022008-02-07T10:28:00.000-08:002008-02-07T10:28:00.000-08:00Both poem and panting have a surreal connotation a...Both poem and panting have a surreal connotation and blend quite well. Lovely post, Sue!Gilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-31285361383735069192008-02-07T10:02:00.000-08:002008-02-07T10:02:00.000-08:00agree about the imagery :) There's something abou...agree about the imagery :) There's something about a ripple that is both soothing and disturbing<BR/><BR/>And thanks for the wonderful commentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-84276549211711980112008-02-07T09:26:00.000-08:002008-02-07T09:26:00.000-08:00Your word use is incredible -- disturbed water...v...Your word use is incredible -- disturbed water...very nice, very vivid!Sherryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08271529958269038071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3031794157814228372008-02-07T08:22:00.000-08:002008-02-07T08:22:00.000-08:00beautifully writtenbeautifully writtenChristine Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-92029194380529844182008-02-07T08:19:00.000-08:002008-02-07T08:19:00.000-08:00I like your imagery. Always. Introducing myselfI like your imagery. Always. <BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/02/introducing-myself-by-way-of-poetry-3ww.html" REL="nofollow">Introducing myself</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-63803258576707767982008-02-07T06:07:00.001-08:002008-02-07T06:07:00.001-08:00i agree with Linda. '...pushy dancing circles spin...i agree with Linda. '...pushy dancing circles spin against the rocky shore' is very green, very vivid...Nice picture!M as in Minthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02737629866326152834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-15275844087093130422008-02-07T00:06:00.000-08:002008-02-07T00:06:00.000-08:00That was lovely! Wow! I have to read it again - ex...That was lovely! <BR/>Wow! I have to read it again - excellentTruefaith1963https://www.blogger.com/profile/03026809487740731739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-57357694521321764902008-02-06T23:19:00.000-08:002008-02-06T23:19:00.000-08:00lovely!! :)keep it rolling...here is my half-baked...lovely!! :)<BR/>keep it rolling...<BR/><BR/>here is my half-baked attempt:<BR/>http://thiswholenewworld.blogspot.com/2008/02/immortal-hope.html<BR/><BR/>take care!Prihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01023126998314268275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-87736736056243684442008-02-06T21:42:00.000-08:002008-02-06T21:42:00.000-08:00While I do like the imagery of this, I love how it...While I do like the imagery of this, I love how it sounds when spoken out loud.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-3113355067328804922008-02-06T18:32:00.000-08:002008-02-06T18:32:00.000-08:00i can smell the green and hear the water.i can smell the green and hear the water.a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!https://www.blogger.com/profile/10559289518691894880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48461557862390351572008-02-06T18:13:00.000-08:002008-02-06T18:13:00.000-08:00"and pushy dancing circles spin against the rocky ..."and pushy dancing <BR/>circles spin against <BR/>the rocky shore"<BR/>is such a delicious image!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-44537424643481545802008-02-06T17:53:00.000-08:002008-02-06T17:53:00.000-08:00I love how you used the prompt and the word pictur...I love how you used the prompt and the word picture of the rain disturbing the water. Wonderful painting, too.Normahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-26555709889922923712008-02-06T16:04:00.000-08:002008-02-06T16:04:00.000-08:00Very thought provoking.Very thought provoking.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-11953568845424615622008-02-06T15:41:00.000-08:002008-02-06T15:41:00.000-08:00I like the visual you get from this well before se...I like the visual you get from this well before seeing the watercolor.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25694715.post-48525529639020839612008-02-06T14:52:00.000-08:002008-02-06T14:52:00.000-08:00I do so love the way you use words. :) Wonderful ...I do so love the way you use words. :) Wonderful use of the prompt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com