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Sunday, September 23, 2012

Maze for Sunday Whirl

Thanks, Brenda, for the Sunday Whirl!

Ah Maze

storm bolts shook the damp
trapped corners into folds
brought remaining climbers
bundled up and watered

the ash hurtled down
when on that all saint's eve
storm bolts shook the husks
dried and set ablaze 

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joanne said...

felt very apocolyptic! nice job

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Very well done! Madeleine Begun Kane

Carol Steel said...

I like the lines:
when on all saint's eve
storm bolts shook the husks
dried and set ablaze.

What a great image! Spooky and fiery, full of the sound of dried corn stalks and husks afire.

The effect is powerful.

Jules said...

I had to read this a few times...
You packed quite a bit in these few lines. My first thought was origami boats on the water...but then the husks a blaze I thought of the movie with the cornfields and secret society that wasn't very nice...

Thanks for your visit.

Daydreamer said...

Powerful ... storms can be extremely scary but, soooo energising too! :)

Anonymous said...

I got the apocalyptic feeling too as I read. I love the blazing end. :)

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Very powerful!

Anna :o]

flaubert said...

Susan, love the spooky feeling to this. My apologizes for always arriving so late to read your wordle offerings.


Selma said...

You are so incredibly creative. I am blown way that you came up with such an outstanding piece from the words in the maze. WOW!