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Ah Maze
storm bolts shook the
damp
trapped corners into folds
brought remaining
climbers
bundled up and watered
the ash hurtled down
when on that all
saint's eve
storm bolts shook the
husks
dried and set ablaze
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felt very apocolyptic! nice job
Very well done! Madeleine Begun Kane
I like the lines:
when on all saint's eve
storm bolts shook the husks
dried and set ablaze.
What a great image! Spooky and fiery, full of the sound of dried corn stalks and husks afire.
The effect is powerful.
I had to read this a few times...
You packed quite a bit in these few lines. My first thought was origami boats on the water...but then the husks a blaze I thought of the movie with the cornfields and secret society that wasn't very nice...
Thanks for your visit.
Powerful ... storms can be extremely scary but, soooo energising too! :)
I got the apocalyptic feeling too as I read. I love the blazing end. :)
Very powerful!
Anna :o]
Susan, love the spooky feeling to this. My apologizes for always arriving so late to read your wordle offerings.
Pamela
You are so incredibly creative. I am blown way that you came up with such an outstanding piece from the words in the maze. WOW!
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