Thanks, Brenda, for the Sunday prompt.
Ghosting Smoke
the scent of jasmine unfurls,
whistles down old
demons
voodoo traps those ample
flaws
set free in her
domain
and from a rear
window
she spots the ghostly
montage
where a flameless
sunset burns
through the smoke of
jasmine
♥ ♥ ♥
The wordles:
jasmine,
granite, whistle, demons, domain, scrap, ample, trapped, montage, flawed, window,
sunset
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11 comments:
very nice use of the wordle... hope this finds you well. have a great night~
Deft wordling indeed. "Rear window" made me think of Hitchcock.
Haunting even while concise. Vivid images you have found in the words.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
Succinct and quite lovely, Susan.
Pamela
Really enjoyed this one... especially:
whistles down old demons
voodoo traps those ample flaws
Very atmospheric. Reminds me of Haiti or, New Orleans with the voodoo.
Great imagery :)
nice and tight and tidy. Great use of the words.
You're still at it big time. Of course! Tracked a B&N advert to a book called Tumbleweeds and it jogged me to Tumblewords, to where I dug a flameless sunset burning through the smoke of jasmine. : )
Beautifully done with lovely imagery!
Madeleine Begun Kane
Nicely done! I love when the ending echoes the beginning...as yours does. Beautiful write.
This reminds me of a Discovery program I watched about a Voodoo Priestess. I can see her sitting comfortably with a wry and knowing grin.
You might enjoy my shorter entry this week called 'Crust'
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/06/sunday-whirl-62-crust-2.html
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