Tumblewords: Fibonacci for Magpie Tales #84

Monday, September 26, 2011

Fibonacci for Magpie Tales #84

Tess Kincaid of Magpie Tales offers this image as prompt #84.

tempo rubato

her

lapse

of faith

shadow like

travels ankle high

rejoins to greet the midnight door

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21 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...: Very thought-provoking... the form is perfect for this.; 11:59 AM
Tess Kincaid said...: I love "ankle high"...and perfect title, too...; 12:34 PM
Words A Day said...: intriguing, and I'm off to google -tempo rubato !; 1:04 PM
Roy Schulze said...: I like the idea of our doubts taking tangible form and shadowing us, even walking when then could fly.; 1:08 PM
Kristen Haskell said...: I don't know if I have the words to express how much I like this. Why does faith lapse for some and not so much for others?; 1:33 PM
Friko said...: An amazing take on the prompt.; 2:13 PM
Brian Miller said...: what a neat form...and the shadow rejoining...i hope the doubts only breed questions and searches for answers....; 3:08 PM
Fireblossom said...: I really like the title, and how you constructed each line a little longer than its predecessor.; 3:34 PM
Maggie said...: Tumblewords, this is brilliant. Oh, I love this.; 5:46 PM
Ann Grenier said...: Love your Raven reference ... to return to his perch above Poe's chamber door. Explains the strange presence of the bird standing tamely by Lenore?; 6:27 PM
Anonymous said...: This is brilliant. Fits perfectly with the image. The lapse of faith is such a powerful concept. You really are a very skilled writer!; 8:20 PM
Anonymous said...: The form fits this piece; well said in just a few words.; 9:50 PM
Dave King said...: Clever, in the very best sense of the word. The form is appropriate and helpful to the thought.; 1:35 AM
chiccoreal said...: Dear Tumblewords: A lovely cadence happening in this new mode (for me) Fibonacci (eh?)...excellent mode of transmission to soul!; 5:41 AM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: very crispy,

love it.; 6:47 AM
Chronicles of Illusions said...: a great form to use for this; 4:00 PM
Isabel Doyle said...: powerful images in a nano-space; 12:06 AM
rel said...: Doubts, always there nipping at our ankles, our achilles heel?
rel; 4:47 AM
Mystic_Mom said...: Very nicely done!; 2:39 PM
Margaret said...: The midnight door... yummy; 8:00 PM
ds said...: Cool form! Love the midnight door--very evocative. Thank you.; 5:09 PM

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