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Monday, July 05, 2010

Senryu for OSI

One Single Impression: Prompt 123: Roads
Thanks to Harshad Mehta of Space Within for this week's prompt: roads




fine red veins

path across the earth

she backtracks









A fractal image.
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13 comments:

Tammie Lee said...

I found myself reading this a few times, wanting to understand. in the end I wondered if she backtracks to experience the fineness of the veins.

anthonynorth said...

Intriguing, this one. Is it Gaia?

Everyday Goddess said...

sometimes it's better to go back?

thought provoking.

Weasel said...

A wonderful read! Sometimes, reliving can be a good thing.

-Weasel

Gemma Wiseman said...

Loved this! I have wandered many interpretations but find I am tuned into that word "veins". It is almost as if she is trying to go back into herself - maybe her roots! A beautiful piece!

SandyCarlson said...

An inveterate backtracker, all I can say is, "yeah."

aayanman said...

There were so many interpretations possible..quite liked it.

Anonymous said...

the overall effect was amazing !!! never thought of going back myself ..

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

i like your blog header very much :)

"Path across the earth" :: I like this

Anonymous said...

This is a beautiful image. I love the usage of the word "path" as a verb.

Patti said...

sometimes you just have to backtrack in order to go forward once again!

The Write Girl said...

Beautiful poetry...I love the poetic form you chose here. A lovely concept of roads.

Sandra.if said...

original view of the prompt...!