Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor

Thursday, May 14, 2009

Late for Totally Optional Prompts

Totally Optional Prompts posts: Tardiness


her future loiters
on the double offsides
of a dozen tomorrows ~
tonight she breathes
a kiss for amour
to the bright Venus star,
first twinkle of dusk,
while pleading to miss
that well-known downside
of endless tardiness

Image created on Bamboo Fun Tablet with Photoshop Elements, resized in Irfanview.



Linda Jacobs said...

Something we all want to miss!

Those first three lines are awesome! And I like the echo of double and dozens!

Rinkly Rimes said...

Better late than never!


Unknown said...

better late than never indeed!

your blog is a visual explosion, sensational.


lissa 07 said...

love the way you put her thoughts together

Jeeves said...

Wow!!!Lovely pic and poem.

Giggles said...

You're speaking to the tardy queen here!! Well done...it would be nice!!

Hugs Giggles

anthonynorth said...

She'll get there.
Excellent words.

Joanne Olivieri said...

The imagery in this piece is very well done. Love the pic as well.

gautami tripathy said...

So visual. Wonderful!

poefusion said...

Your thoughts and words are always so well placed and precise. I love those first three lines. And, your artwork is beautiful. Have a nice weekend.

Anonymous said...

The imagery in both the poem and the artwork are comfortably familiar, yet at the same time, awakening.

Gemma Wiseman said...

Absolutely beautiful piece of art! And then the poetry enriches the whole sensory experience! Wonderful!

Geraldine said...

I use to be obsessed with being on time, not in the past few years LOL... Love this watercolor and great poem to accompany. Well done Sue!

gautami tripathy said...

double offsides..love that!