Michelle, at Poefusion Friday 5, offers these words for prompt.
pheromones
earmarked
sedulous
apiculate
blisters
And, once again, my dictionary was a necessary reference. I can't wait to read what the others wrote - you, too, can check them out (or play) by following the link.
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meteorites of birds
release white shadows
ahead of the sinking sun
earmarked as summer's
sedulous clean-up flock
these flashing birds ferret
bugs and bees drying
like amber tinted blisters
on the wooden deck
apiculate beaks emit
pheromones to keep
their cluster in complicity
when, after a feeding frenzy
of fermented grapes, they
whirl to undress my pear tree
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6 comments:
I like the ending, birds undress a pear, what an image
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What beautiful lines you wrote. I love the use of bugs and bees drying like amber tinted blisters and the ending of how the birds undress your pear tree. Beautiful. Have a nice day.
Dear Sue,
Clapping,laughing and loving each word! I watched the birds and the bugs as I read. I love the pictures you paint in my mind with your words.
Thanks!
Sherry
oh i love this one.. and i find a bit of my own back yard in it as well....
Beautiful. Those birds will get those pears everytime! So will the bugs . . . but such is nature. Thanks for creating and sharing.
wow, love the portrayal of natures sights and sounds... birds, bees and bugs.. sounds like a garden heaven...
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