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Sunday, September 30, 2012

Holy for Sunday Whirl #76

Thanks, Brenda, for the wordle prompt!

the ambivalence of holy
hovers in a dazed state
while incense breathes fear
and flaps empty prayers
at souls who scurry to
seek a soupcon of tenderness
and a thimble full of water
the ambivalence of holy
becomes empty of essence

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flaubert said...

Wonderfully concise and thought provoking, Susan.


Anonymous said...

Vivid and compact. Nicely done.

Anonymous said...

I love this one. Again...I'm so glad you found The Whirl. It's nice to visit your work each week.

Maggie said...

So lovely and powerful, Tumblewords.

Geraldine said...

so true. powerful emotions conjured up...well done Sue.

Your ref. re: Autumn Leaves, I can so relate too.

Hugs, G

gautami tripathy said...

Excellent poem!