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Tuesday, June 05, 2012

Poem for Sunday Whirl #59

Thanks to Brenda at Sunday Whirl for the following Wordle Prompt!

Crash of Seasons

a crumple of clouds
bruises the yearning sky
draws a single piercing burst
of glowing sunlight

summer crouches
distant yet near
a split-edge instant
chisels it from spring

green shoots rise
beat back the doldrums
greet the growing time
folding flannels, she smiles

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Gail said...

I look forward to joining this challenge.

Great job.

Laurie Kolp said...

Great job with the words... such lovely images.

annell4 said...

I loved the way you ended your write!

annell4 said...

Beautiful watercolor!

Mary said...

I do like the way you used the words! "Crash of seasons" - I love that title.

Anonymous said...

Love "crumple of clouds". I can see it. The whole piece seems to smile and beckon,


flaubert said...

Simply beautiful imagery, Susan. I felt as if I were watching the season of summer come into being. Lovely.


Tammie Lee said...

your poems are so of this season, i can relate to each word that you have skillfully breathed life into.