I like both this and your last wrenching one very much. They are lovely succinct and apt responses to the prompt and are little poems that could work without the pix. Take care, k.
Three faces of someone... I always thought Eve was recognisable by her three fig leaves! That gives me an idea for a limerick. No, you will have to wait!
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I love the word quicksilver'd! Nice!
Actually, a highly intelligent response to the prompt - thanks.
Wow, this is perfect! You are a clever poet.
Cleverly crafted. Love it.
nicely done...thanks for this
Sue,
I did think of Eve, but you did it so much better.
rel
Nice write, Sue! Quicksilver gives an impression of disappearing quickly.In the morning light it did apparently!
Hank
I like both this and your last wrenching one very much. They are lovely succinct and apt responses to the prompt and are little poems that could work without the pix. Take care, k.
Intersting.
quicksilver- excellent choice- succinct poem.
You know how to form the perfect words. I love, 'midday lights.' Really sets a mood.
I love this so much. The image of the quicksilver is fantastic!
This is sheer genius. So many interpretations and all - possible!
Stretching every which way ... multiple personalities, split identities ... painful all around.
i like the three faces of eve concept
Three faces of someone... I always thought Eve was recognisable by her three fig leaves!
That gives me an idea for a limerick. No, you will have to wait!
Clever, this. And what's more, delightful. What more could anyone ask?
Superb!
Anna :o]
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