october sun sets
on wings of the elephants
fermented cities
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Sunday, October 02, 2011
Haiku for Magpie Tales #85
Tess Kincaid of Magpie Tales offers the following image for writers' prompt.
october sun sets
on wings of the elephants
fermented cities
october sun sets
on wings of the elephants
fermented cities
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26 comments:
Beautiful...captures the image perfectly...
Mm, I like your fermented cities.
Fermented cities, pollution and all! Excellent way of putting it!
Hank
'Fermented cities' is a fantastic description ...
I too like fermented cities; perfect word for your conceptual response.
ah it is the elephant in the room after all
striking words
The fog and the mist, the dust and clouds is all rolled up in two words "fermented cities" by you brilliantly!! Thank you for the visit on my magpie tale!!
This has a beautiful intensity...fermented, yes!
Yup- ferment... Thanks
apt.
love it.
With the nuclear power plants and skyscrapers in the background your 'fermented cities' words are spot on.
fermented cities - says it exactly!
fermented cities? Yes they are!
Eleven well chosen words!
fermented cities...great play on the desolation of the picture...
NICE take :-)
Yes, you always manage to say so much in a few words.
Fabulous.
Beautiful haiku! :-)
Fermented cities, yes, that works!
I hope I never find myself beneath a flying elephant.
So wonderful drawn in so few words.
perfect. and fermented cities is genius.
The Haiku wonderful. The comments spot on!
Fermented cities wow that is a great haiku line...
Dear Tumblewords: You always get right at the essence of things! Love this purity of prose of yours!
perfectly captured
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