unidentified photo, found in a Missouri antique shop
Retrograde Mercury
dance parade
ghostly crisscross lines
weaving time
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Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Monday, August 22, 2011
Senryu for Magpie Tales
Tess Kincaid of Magpie Tales offers this photo as writers' prompt #79.
Retrograde Mercury
Retrograde Mercury
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19 comments:
Love the happy faces. I remember that era, although I was just a child!!
of course, going to the dance.
From the title to the seven words, you've written a fantastic story with many beginnings and even more endings. Love this!
Rick
It never ceases to amaze me how we can all come up with such unique pieces from the same prompt. Love this... especially the middle line.
nice - this is how I like my poems...solid work
great words-well done!!
criss cross lines weaving time...nice turn of a phrase...a beautiful senryu
short few simple words, yet do much depth and expression. beautiful
Ha, going to dance can do that..put smiles and excitement on lovely faces:)
Nice Magpie!
A few words with much meaning :)
I think even just the title would have worked. What a fabulous image : )
You've definitely captured the mood of the photo!
time's tapestry...
Dear Tumblewords: That explains it..the odd light on the vehicle! Talent abounds in the magnificently cosmic "Senruy for Magpie Tales". Intriguing...:)
"ghostly crisscross lines" eerie or tragic?
Hauntingly beautiful with an amazing economy of words...
Interesting imagery.
nice senryu! you say quite a lot in a compact poem!
Nice...I especially like the title...
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