…though her days have passed.. her soul was still living within that framed geniuses… amazing haiku… it volumes the connection between the model and the photographer… thanks for the read.(:
Now, THAT's a proper prompt Haiku! I really must attempt them more often. Strange how a few lines can be as struggling to find as a whole passage....but yours is fab!
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Skillful and elegant, loved
-in the snap that snatched her soul
A hint of wink, do you think?
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
The way in....
The phrase "the snap that snatched her soul" is a wonderful one. In just a few lines, you packed a lot in.
(For a poet, brevity is next to godliness!--ha!)
"In the snap that snatched her soul"...it certainly did, didn't it. Sharp and to the point, loved it!
Love the wink you have offered if not truly found there. Great take on the prompt.
…though her days have passed.. her soul was still living within that framed geniuses… amazing haiku… it volumes the connection between the model and the photographer… thanks for the read.(:
Brightest blessings.
~Kelvin
excellent eye for detail. Well done!
Dear TW: This is smart and tight. Love "snatched her soul"! Haiku-delicious!
Her soul was snatched, but returned with this poem..few words..large scope!
Skillful Haiku again as always...capturing essence in three lines. Beautifully done.
yes, it is shuttered - almost like she was going to laugh but trying to repress it...
I love how you summed this up so wonderfully.
Love the first two lines, gripping start.
Wacky is a great W word. I love the shot and haiku.
Very nice. Very.
This is incredible one of my favorites fabulous
I bow
.....just wonderful
So well told...
a statement
Succinct and all-encompassing - well done.
Now, THAT's a proper prompt Haiku! I really must attempt them more often. Strange how a few lines can be as struggling to find as a whole passage....but yours is fab!
Lovely!
Anna :o]
yes.
Lovely haiku!
Mad Kane
Wonderful.
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