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Monday, March 14, 2011

Haiku for Magpie Tales #57

Magpie Tales #57    Willow weekly posts an enigmatic image to prompt writers to write. This week:







the Marching Ides
luck-in-waiting disguised
...a phantom leaf



 
A Willow Image
 
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29 comments:

nic said...

"luck-in-waiting" = brilliant.

i've never been much good at haikus, but i can recognize madd poetry skillz when i see 'em. :)

anthonynorth said...

Luck-in-waiting is so comforting. Excellent.

Unknown said...

Great, great wordsmanship. beautifully done.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

profound.

Elaine said...

This is just so lovely.

Maggie said...

I love it!

Nanka said...

Beautiful Haiku and so much said. It sounds like a spooky mystery story.
Loved it immensely!!

Brigid O'Connor said...

Beautifully crafted, I like the idea of 'luck-in-waiting'.

Brother Ollie said...

Nice tight haiku.

Leslie said...

NICE haiku for this image! I love:

" a phantom leaf"

Louise said...

Good one Tumblewords!

Jinksy said...

How appropriate - right on cue for the 15th!

Christine said...

Great use of putting the words disguised and phantom together. Nice.

sukipoet said...

ah, she nods

Marilyn & Jeff said...

An excellent wee poem ..a phantom leaf indeed.

Helen said...

Ranks among the best this week ...

DebbyMc said...

luck in waiting...love it!

Lolamouse said...

The eye is drawn to that phantom leaf, isn't it? Happy St. Pat's to you!

Lyn said...

This has a perfect pitch..really amazing, how much you've said!

R. Burnett Baker said...

Just a perfect sentiment!

Tess Kincaid said...

I love your play on the Ides of March. Well done.

Lucy Westenra said...

Is "luck-in-waiting" an everyday name for the African violet, or perhaps the shamrock?

spiritsoflena said...

Love this "ode to march" haiku.

Martin said...

I agree with so many of your readers. "Luck-in-waiting" is superb.

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Olivia said...

Doesn't Luck always come in a little disguised?

Love xx

~T~ said...

But what kind of luck is waiting? Only the best, I hope!

Anonymous said...

Oooooh wowwiiees!! Dangerously dark... loved it!!
Really BEAUTIFULLY written!

signed...bkm said...

luck in waiting...it is always waiting for us...bkm

Jotter Girl said...

Simply perfect!