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Wednesday, June 04, 2008

Yogurt in the Dingle

Friday 5 at Poefusion This week's words are ochre, straw, gravel, crash, yogurt

ochre dyed straw
jam-packed the dingle’s
dry creekbed gravel

first crash of thunder ~
that potato truck from hell ~
drove the downpour

spun the bitter seeds
into lustrous neap tides
of mabe peach yogurt


paisley said...

well girl,, all i know is nothin touched your poetry!!!! i am sooooooo glad to see you back!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

So glad to have you pack. Your poetry is as strong as ever! Loved 'jam-packed the dingle's/dry creek bed gravel'.

Whitesnake said...

I see a short break has NOT diminished your ablities only enhanced them......

Geez did I use some big words there or what?

Anonymous said...

I'm so glad you're recovering Sue, but I'm sad you had difficulties. I hope you know, I'm sure you know how much love and caring there is out here in blogworld for you. It's hard to do much from long distance, but you're in our thoughts and prayers.

Anonymous said...

Great come-back poem. Love the potato truck-- I am still thinking about that image.

Anonymous said...

your words blend nicely together and I like the way you use yogurt

poefusion said...

Welcome back Tumblewords. I am so glad to see you up and writing again. Your poetry hasn't skipped a beat during your absence. This is packed with wonderful images.

I am sorry you were so sick. I hope you are feeling much better now. Take all the time you need to recover because your health is the most important thing you can have. Have a nice day.

Q said...

Dear Sue,
So glad to read your work again.
I hold you healthy and wise in my thoughts.
As always you are so very good...
Thanks for your energy and your talent.

Giggles said...

Thrilled to see you back on board! Wishing you all the best! Good health to you dear!

Hugs Sherrie