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Sunday, February 24, 2013

Breath for Sunday Whirl #97

Thanks, Brenda, for the wordle prompt...

a breath

a pot bellied moon
a prophet on the fly
a discipline flung away
a patience pieced by limits
a compassion for the fall
a night steals tears
a sublime gaze delayed
a heroic moment lost 

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Heidi said...

I like the way you used the wordle. There is a lot said in these few lines.

Stan Ski said...

a title for my memoirs... :)

Veronica Roth said...

a nicely whirled poem. :)

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

How often do we let those potentially heroic moments pass? Something to think about.

flaubert said...

Love the abruptness of this and your fractial is beautiful. Not so sure of the spelling, it is late and I am tired.