Movie
held within
the scent of nightflecks of stillness
sway fine sight
skim the eye
to fill the end of light
and load the dark
with a gift of scenes
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Sunday, November 25, 2012
Movie for Sunday Whirl #84
Thanks, Brenda, for the Sunday Wordle Prompt.
flecks of stillness
sway fine sight
skim the eye
to fill the end of light
and load the dark
with a gift of scenes
flecks of stillness
sway fine sight
skim the eye
to fill the end of light
and load the dark
with a gift of scenes
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13 comments:
I'm always impressed with your brevity!
O what you can do with a handful of words! Lovely whirling!
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Never read about a movie, being written so well !
This was worthy read :)
I agree with the others, Susan. The conciseness of this poem is lovely.
Pamela
The scent of night. I could breathe that in. Nicely done.
Ahhh... the secrets the night may, or may not reveal... :)
Lovely.
Brief, yes, but packs a wallop.
wow, an economy of words that paint such a vivid picture, great job!
Reminds me of the first time I saw the first 'Star Wars' film in one of the last great old huge movie theaters. The front row center of the balcony - it was truly larger than life for the moments we were there.
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed "Sister Dreams."
This is fantastic! Movies and I...old friends. Now I'm craving popcorn. hmmm...
You managed to work all the words together so well here in such compact form! Nice.
Wonderfully wordled. You capture why we all love a good movie, thank you,
Elizabeth
This was great! Thanks for visiting me.
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