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Sunday, November 25, 2012

Movie for Sunday Whirl #84

Thanks, Brenda, for the Sunday Wordle Prompt.


held within
the scent of night
flecks of stillness 
sway fine sight 
skim the eye 
to fill the end of light 
and load the dark 
with a gift of scenes

♥     ♥     ♥


Laurie Kolp said...

I'm always impressed with your brevity!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

O what you can do with a handful of words! Lovely whirling!

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Pratibha said...

Never read about a movie, being written so well !

This was worthy read :)

flaubert said...

I agree with the others, Susan. The conciseness of this poem is lovely.


C.C. said...

The scent of night. I could breathe that in. Nicely done.

Daydreamer said...

Ahhh... the secrets the night may, or may not reveal... :)

Anonymous said...

Brief, yes, but packs a wallop.

Mama Pajama said...

wow, an economy of words that paint such a vivid picture, great job!

Jules said...

Reminds me of the first time I saw the first 'Star Wars' film in one of the last great old huge movie theaters. The front row center of the balcony - it was truly larger than life for the moments we were there.

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed "Sister Dreams."

Anonymous said...

This is fantastic! Movies and I...old friends. Now I'm craving popcorn. hmmm...

Mary said...

You managed to work all the words together so well here in such compact form! Nice.

Anonymous said...

Wonderfully wordled. You capture why we all love a good movie, thank you,


Cheryl said...

This was great! Thanks for visiting me.