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Sunday, October 14, 2012

Umbrella for Sunday Whirl #78

Thanks, Brenda, for the wordle prompt!

a child of the dark
she inherited thunder
on the right side of light

an umbrella of gold
was her excuse to stand
and to join the deep shift

a child of the dark
she vowed to become ruler
of the light side of night

As always, these are quick writes before viewing others' work. And it's amazing how much similarity  and how many differences can be found at the Sunday Whirl entries! 

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Laurie Kolp said...

Great contrasts here!

flaubert said...

Susan, that first stanza is lovely and all that it conveys.


Anonymous said...

love this tumble, i'm getting the
hint of a smash triology.

Stan Ski said...

I like what you've done here... light and dark at the same time...briliant!

teri said...

For some reason I really want to take that child home and let them rest for a while. Great writing.