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Sunday, August 05, 2012

Night for Sunday Whirl #68

Thanks, Brenda, for the wordle prompt!

at the deck's pitched stern
links held the port anchor tight
moon shade sneaked on board

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Q said...

"Moon shade sneaked on board"
I can see Miss Moon's shade slipping undetected...a story has unfolded for me...
always a delight to have your words play in my mind.
Thank you.

Walt Wojtanik said...

Finding peace and beauty in the brevity of your wordle. Well crafted!

Anonymous said...

"moon shade sneaked on board" ... Ooh, I like this!

Daydreamer said...

Lovely :)
I also love that line: Moon shade sneaked on board.

Anonymous said...

very nice, loved the last line as well

Anonymous said...

Really like the brief but vivid imagery you have created.


flaubert said...

Concise and beautiful, Susan. Yes, "moon shade sneaked on board" is my favourite part also.


Jules said...

Moon shade...anything like a moon-glade - a peaceful enchanted-ness.

Thanks for your visit. And kind words.

Anonymous said...

adore the vocab. and the mood
each word evokes.
clipped tone lends importance.

Carol Steel said...

I really enjoyed this especially the last line. The images are forceful yet full of magic.

Anonymous said...

Gorgeous! Love the moon's shade.