image: Bert Stern
her cellophane wrap
easy to see, hard to read
a first grade primer
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Wednesday, December 28, 2011
Senryu for Magpie Tales
Tess Kincaid, of Magpie Tales, offers the following image as writers' prompt:
her cellophane wrap
her cellophane wrap
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a lesson we need but do we want it
Great depth behind that.
thanks for sharing your words
"her cellophane wrap
easy to see, hard to read"...truly the right description for her. nice haiku! thanks for dropping by my blog and for your comments...happy new year!
I got the feeling of Marilyn as a shiny plastic-wrapped doll from the first two lines, but with the third line I lost the thread though I love the image.
And always that child.......
I do so love the short, sweet and deep.........
:)
Nice senryu. She continues to fascinate us, doesn't she?
Wonderful .... you captured her aura well.
I like the way you allude to the doll-image with the cellophane. If she only knew how much we all loved her after she was gone.
Good job on this. I guess we're all easy to see and hard to read.
great haiku...we saw her facade, but not what was hidden inside
Yes indeed, "her cellophane wrap." I think many of us are covered with one. Amazing write.
Yes indeed.
Hmmmm... Good!
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