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Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Fibonacci and Watercolor





Bone, the moderator of Three Word Wednesday says: Each week, I post some words. People write things using the words. Then they comment here. The prompt words today:
Desperate
Lapse
Traveled



Totally Optional Prompts said: On Aug 23, 1617, the 1st one-way streets were established, and it happened in London. This week's challenge is to create 'one-way' poems.






her
lapse
of faith,
shadow like,
traveled shoulder high
a desperate one way journey



Sun over Cyprus, original watercolor by Sue.

12 comments:

PJD said...

some things in our past we can never escape and follow us always? that's what I get from this.

anthonynorth said...

You certainly got the essence of the prompt there. And the picture is beautiful.

Odessa said...

"traveled shoulder high" - i love this line. excellen take on both prompts!

Anonymous said...

I love the shape of this poem, as well as the pace.

Anonymous said...

beautiful watercolor, a lovely place... ah, the fib was a perfect fit for the story chosen...

Anonymous said...

lovely thing, this desperate lapse of faith...
thank you

Art and Poetry said...

Lovely painting and poem, but I don't believe in a one way journey people can always turn back.

gautami tripathy said...

This says it all!

making inroads into I know what not

Dave King said...

Great picture, and I like the idea of a one-way poem.

susan said...

Good use of the words. Thanks for the read.

Anonymous said...

very perceptive. Although a lapse in faith, might not need be a one-way journey.

also, lovely painting

Cynthia said...

oh, I love this poem, her laspe
of faith...did you create this
form yourself?