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Thursday, October 25, 2007

Winged



One feathered flock of
tumbler pigeons
guide a herd of clouds

to overwrite the
hum of earth’s turning
stage a showy lomcevak

defy calligraphy
of August dawn where
an eclipse marks the spot




Original Watercolor by Sue
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Winged is the poem for the
Totally Optional Prompts Thursday


11 comments:

Jo said...

I learned a new word: lomcevak! This has such energy and beauty, I loved it.

Brian said...

"One feathered flock of
tumbler pigeons
guide a herd of clouds"

very, very nice!

paisley said...

lovely as always....

Christine said...

I think if the prompt is the strangeness of something ordinary, you were spot on. In any case, your poem is lovely. And I learned a new word too: lomcevak! I had to look it up on Answers. Nice job.:)

gautami tripathy said...

This takes me into another world. You did very well with the prompt.

wendy said...

tumbler pigeons.
wow.

pepektheassassin said...

A lovely poem --plus I learned a new word! Thanks!

odessa said...

"One feathered flock of
tumbler pigeons
guide a herd of clouds" - wow. what a beautiful imagery.

Dick said...

Full of the atmosphere of the upper air. That's got to be a first for 'lomcevak'!

Norma said...

I love the pigeons guiding a herd of clouds.

Thanks for stopping by my TOP.

my backyard said...

Great images!