One feathered flock of
tumbler pigeons
guide a herd of clouds
to overwrite the
hum of earth’s turning
stage a showy lomcevak
defy calligraphy
of August dawn where
an eclipse marks the spotPattiw.jpg)
Original Watercolor by Sue
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Winged is the poem for the Totally Optional Prompts Thursday
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Thursday, October 25, 2007
Winged
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11 comments:
I learned a new word: lomcevak! This has such energy and beauty, I loved it.
"One feathered flock of
tumbler pigeons
guide a herd of clouds"
very, very nice!
lovely as always....
I think if the prompt is the strangeness of something ordinary, you were spot on. In any case, your poem is lovely. And I learned a new word too: lomcevak! I had to look it up on Answers. Nice job.:)
This takes me into another world. You did very well with the prompt.
tumbler pigeons.
wow.
A lovely poem --plus I learned a new word! Thanks!
"One feathered flock of
tumbler pigeons
guide a herd of clouds" - wow. what a beautiful imagery.
Full of the atmosphere of the upper air. That's got to be a first for 'lomcevak'!
I love the pigeons guiding a herd of clouds.
Thanks for stopping by my TOP.
Great images!
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