the patron saint of criminals
calls forth the ides of hell and
angels churned from milky whey
spill across horizon’s line
hieroglyphics prick the night
each close re-draws a dawning
infinity begins
where gray covers black and
a white slice of moon on a string
spins the shape of absence
where the past climbs over the future
on the stair steps of Escher
Altered Watercolor
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11 comments:
infinity begins
where gray covers black and
a white slice of moon on a string
spins the shape of absence
Oh that last verse......so absolutely perfect. And the one before it too!
i feel like saying and thus the insanity pursues... but then again i am usually a little dark......
very well done...
I don't have words..as of now!
Oh, wow. This is astoundingly beautiful. I too love the last two stanzas in particular.
This is remarkable. I like the ambiguity--I love the title.
"angels churned from milky whey" is a holy sh*t momment for me, especially as they "spill across horizon’s line".
I like the whey you've played with the sound to create your atmosphere. Reads very nicely.
Each line, each word...so exquisite.
I am holding "past climbs over the future" in my mind. Wow.
Sherry
angels churned from milky whey - I was so caught with that poem, I almost forgot to read the rest of the poem. Wonderful
brilliant imagery. Absolutely love this poem!
Can you hear the clapping? I'm giving you a standing ovation!! This is absolutely exquisite. Every line dazzles. Thank you!
:)
this is awesome
i love the visuals your words give me
off to check out the new prompt site
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