Writer's Island Prompt for today...
chiming like a sailer's bell
a sea glass bottle
tumbled through the tide
screw top bottle
not the cork of an elite
was salt-sealed tight
an odd natal chart wrapped
a tiny parchment paper
bearing an astrologer's stamp
startling aspects in your chart
send money for the news ~
no return address
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18 comments:
spammed by the sea!!!!!!
Even if the bottle doesn't have the cork of an elite this poem has.
Very beautiful.
"an odd natal chart wrapped
a tiny parchment paper
bearing an astrologer's stamp"
Now, that is something I would like to find..
:D
A chance find.........send money! :-) LOL......I'm still smiling, thanks, I needed that!
Scott
Very beautiful language - the opening stanza is gorgeous.
mark
I love the imagery in your words - what an intriguing little mystery from the sea!
Oh this is very clever......and so beautifully put. That first stanza is gorgeous, but then they all are. You have really caught it all here.
Love the poem and fractal to match! The movement and imagery in your words is wonderful! Peace, JP/deb
"Send money for the news"
That line set me thinking.
Loved the Tide pool.
That's fabulous, especially the unexpected ending!
'no return address' ahh, that's always the case in relation to money - this was sooo cool. Thanks for sharing.
I really like the srew top bottle sealed with salt- very realistic and humorous.
The mesage too shows a sense of humor.
Nice poem!
Junk mail in a bottle? Sure, why not. Great poem.
Oh, this is funny indeed! I love the creative touch put into this.
Haha! THis is a different spin on the old message bottle! I enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by!!!
very nicely done
Beautiful poetry, Thank You!
This is great!! It really makes you read it slowly so that you can savor the words and understand the story
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