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Monday, October 29, 2007

Change ~ Haiku


golden light
spreads diamond dust
decorates frost


iPod plugs
thumbed text blurts replace
porch gliders




Fractal created in Fractal Explorer
Change is the prompt issued today by
One Deep Breath

14 comments:

Jo said...

Your last is great, though I mourn this change.....

Left-handed Trees... said...

i loved the first one especially...

Sandy said...

Diamond dust! Oh yes, I have seen that, wonderful haiku.

Give me the porch glider, any day.

get zapped said...

The first one is beautiful, the second made me chuckle...

Colorful Prose said...

Love the magic of the first one.

Barone said...

Diamond dusted frost...gorgeous image...I feel sparkling behind my eyes just thinking of it! barone

Redness said...

I'm learning to appreciate poetry which I've never quite got till now ... thank you! There's a sweet treat for you over on my blog;~)

qualcosa di bello said...

i'm with jo & sandy on the glider! keen observations...

christine said...

What a contrast these two provide... text messaging - could be creative or writer's bane. The image of dust and frost is simply elegant.

Clare said...

Terrific haiku!! I especially love the golden light and diamond dust on the frost -- such a beautiful image. Your fractal is magnificent -- wonderful kaleidoscope of colors!
:)

Crafty Green Poet said...

diamond dust of frost - wonderful image.

coconutannies said...

Your 2nd haiku really shows that change can be painful! Nice use of the subject!

Rae Trigg said...

I really like your first haiku. What a lovely image!

Patois said...

I love the first for "diamond dust." I love the second for the smile it brought me.