golden light
spreads diamond dust
decorates frost
iPod plugs
thumbed text blurts replace
porch gliders
Fractal created in Fractal Explorer
Change is the prompt issued today by One Deep Breath
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Monday, October 29, 2007
Change ~ Haiku
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Your last is great, though I mourn this change.....
i loved the first one especially...
Diamond dust! Oh yes, I have seen that, wonderful haiku.
Give me the porch glider, any day.
The first one is beautiful, the second made me chuckle...
Love the magic of the first one.
Diamond dusted frost...gorgeous image...I feel sparkling behind my eyes just thinking of it! barone
I'm learning to appreciate poetry which I've never quite got till now ... thank you! There's a sweet treat for you over on my blog;~)
i'm with jo & sandy on the glider! keen observations...
What a contrast these two provide... text messaging - could be creative or writer's bane. The image of dust and frost is simply elegant.
Terrific haiku!! I especially love the golden light and diamond dust on the frost -- such a beautiful image. Your fractal is magnificent -- wonderful kaleidoscope of colors!
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diamond dust of frost - wonderful image.
Your 2nd haiku really shows that change can be painful! Nice use of the subject!
I really like your first haiku. What a lovely image!
I love the first for "diamond dust." I love the second for the smile it brought me.
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