Photos Poetry Prose
high-rise icy peaksguard the wavy desert heatwagon train on pausehunts the hazy hard pan trailcoyotes howl into the dusk
Fractal by SueThe 3WordWednesday Prompt offered these words for use: icy, train, pausefractals
Oooooo, that last line made the hairs on my arms stand on end. Thrillingly atmospheric!
Hi rise icy peak is a great imageJo's right about the atmosphere
Hi Tumblewords...what a very nice visual...very imaginative...well done!Sandy
oh i loved this.. the very image of strength and adventure!!!!!
I felt like the first two lines really put me there.
"hunts the hazy hard pan trail".... I love how it rolls off the tongue. Very atmospheric!~S :)
This is so beautiful! Brings a long-past moment so close you could almost touch it. :)
Westward ho!I see the icy peaks.You are very talented.I enjoy each poem.Sherry
Wonderful imagery. The howling coyotes would give me pause as well.
A great landscape - I love the atmosphere of this piece.
Yes, superb..love the fractal that somehow enhanced the imagery for me, thank you.
Beautiful imagery...I wanted to read this out loud because the words were so pleasant to hear.
This felt so good, I was there watching that desert heat, looking for the trail and felt the coyotes lurking. Beautifully done, Susan.
Perfect image of a past time. Reminded me of the Oregon Trail :)
The atmosphere of this poem reminded me, somehow, of the Gold Rush. Thanks for sharing such beautiful words.
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