Wild words skid
amid lucky bamboo
call the cry of scars
paddle down the moon
bereft of useful mojo
sundry recent dead
sidestep history's debt.
One mad zebra
kicks a bird of paradise,
swears the past was true.
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i am amazed at times with the workings of your mind.. you are always so figurative,, and i so literal... but it does sound nice when read aloud doesn't it????
Brilliant! I love where you took us.
Love the way this poem makes me want to read it over and over...
Wonderful collection of words here and love how they come together.
Really wonderful. I love the last bit.
it was true!
Honest!
That was superb.
Awesome!
gautami
The water color is superb.
beautifully mysterious and thought provoking
Love "paddle down the moon." Also, thanks for the new word!
I thought you made up the title word, too...so creative!
I always look forward to seeing where you've gone. I'm a willing guest taken along!
Vivid and full of surprise.
This is what poetry's for.
!!! Super !!!
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