For the Writers Island Prompt. This piece is a fibonacci form with partial Pleiades patterns. It was fun to write...
free
forms
friend-filled
flip ripples
force grins from the gray
familiar faces reduce blues
Pollen Mover, photo by Sue
poems and digital photos
Fractals Photos Poetry Prose Watercolor
Tuesday, November 13, 2007
Friendship
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This is very good, especially when read aloud. I love the last two lines......yep, that's friendship.
This beautiful piece feels so lighthearted. Thanks. Oh and I appreciate your comment. Makes my heart flip to hear that from a master.
Another beautiful picture to accompany your fun words!
That's a lot of fun! Cool way to interpret the prompt.
beautiful flowing words! The picture is reminding me of the summer I wish we still had!
Thanks so much for your kind comment today.
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So many forms of poetry I'm unfamiliar with, that I learn about as I travel through Writer's Island posts. This was a great piece, so fun and so true.
By the way, thank you for your comment on mine today, I just heard from my friend and she is indeed okay. My heart's a little lighter now.
This is the most fun I've had all day. Thanks for the smiles. :)
Well, I learn something new every day! Really unusual and it works extremely ell!
I learned something new!...You are such an excellent writer! THank you for commenting on my site!
Fibonacci! wow! that's an education,I like the F's and the way that you can almost read this piece backwards.
Thanks for visiting STGuy.
I love it!
Those seven sisters are a-smiling!!!!
This was unique in the way you did it is unique. Like this a lot!
Such a fun fib :)
I love the last line.
And the photo - gorgeous!
Just wonderful!
Oooh, it was fun to read, too, especially out loud.
'fibonacci form' this is my first encounter and I love it! You are real good.
Excellent, as always. That last line is especially wonderful.
A fun one. Loved the ending!
Mad Kane
It is great fun to read it too...
"a fibonacci form with partial Pleiades patterns" sounds like a lovely jumper you have knitted which is the blue grey warmth of the poem. Cool.
This is great. I love to write Fibs and did my first Pleiades, but never thought to combine them somewhat -- you make it look effortless, though I know it is not.
Fantastic - wow, always enjoyed f words, these make it more so - Thank YOU!
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