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Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Friendship


For the Writers Island Prompt. This piece is a fibonacci form with partial Pleiades patterns. It was fun to write...



free

forms

friend-filled

flip ripples

force grins from the gray

familiar faces reduce blues






Pollen Mover
, photo by Sue

23 comments:

Jo said...

This is very good, especially when read aloud. I love the last two lines......yep, that's friendship.

Just Jen said...

smile, you got a friend!

Marja said...

This beautiful piece feels so lighthearted. Thanks. Oh and I appreciate your comment. Makes my heart flip to hear that from a master.

pepektheassassin said...

Another beautiful picture to accompany your fun words!

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

That's a lot of fun! Cool way to interpret the prompt.

Lucy said...

beautiful flowing words! The picture is reminding me of the summer I wish we still had!
Thanks so much for your kind comment today.
:))

Karina said...

So many forms of poetry I'm unfamiliar with, that I learn about as I travel through Writer's Island posts. This was a great piece, so fun and so true.

By the way, thank you for your comment on mine today, I just heard from my friend and she is indeed okay. My heart's a little lighter now.

Brian said...

This is the most fun I've had all day. Thanks for the smiles. :)

keith hillman said...

Well, I learn something new every day! Really unusual and it works extremely ell!

Pam Aries said...

I learned something new!...You are such an excellent writer! THank you for commenting on my site!

aka Danny Wise said...

Fibonacci! wow! that's an education,I like the F's and the way that you can almost read this piece backwards.
Thanks for visiting STGuy.

Lea said...

I love it!

Those seven sisters are a-smiling!!!!

Mary Timme said...

This was unique in the way you did it is unique. Like this a lot!

Becca said...

Such a fun fib :)

I love the last line.

And the photo - gorgeous!

lissa said...

Just wonderful!

...deb said...

Oooh, it was fun to read, too, especially out loud.

UL said...

'fibonacci form' this is my first encounter and I love it! You are real good.

Herb Urban said...

Excellent, as always. That last line is especially wonderful.

Madeleine said...

A fun one. Loved the ending!
Mad Kane

gautami tripathy said...

It is great fun to read it too...

PaulS said...

"a fibonacci form with partial Pleiades patterns" sounds like a lovely jumper you have knitted which is the blue grey warmth of the poem. Cool.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

This is great. I love to write Fibs and did my first Pleiades, but never thought to combine them somewhat -- you make it look effortless, though I know it is not.

Redness said...

Fantastic - wow, always enjoyed f words, these make it more so - Thank YOU!