The Daily Tempest
writhing limbs
uproot the senses
guide the lithe
toward smoky mirrors
magnetized by mimicry
where nonstop coverage
plays upon the clay
uproots the tallest
and offends the grave
by writhing limbs
Fractal image was created in Apophysis, resized in Irfanview.
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10 comments:
I like how you used the words. So effectively they were buried into the piece and not obvious.
Well done!
Great imagery in this one. It's brought alive.
loved reading you !! :)
Love the image. The poem very nice take on the promps. I use painshop pro a lot for my blog but I see your quite more advanced than I.
Nice work
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Love the image. The poem very nice take on the promps. I use painshop pro a lot for my blog but I see your quite more advanced than I.
Nice work
This Blog Of Mine
this was eerie in a Tim Burton kind of way - liked it!
Hm. I read this a couple of different ways. You've got some great mental imagery here, and I like the fractal, too.
The words used perfectly. Great flow and the visuals were crisp. Excellent take.
totally love the flow of this, how each line is crafted with use to the other. And the use of the words, well done.
interesting images...!
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