This week’s, and the twenty fourth, Writer’s Island prompt is: “Empowered”.
My response follows. There's nothing like a dance with death to empower a survivor.
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flickering lights from past
evade the sterile cocoon
black lines the silent surround
between the mid-dark of night
and pink pearl of sunrise
another day fills the niche
immediacy once removed
demise holds an empty threat
fades to the faraway horizon
doubt triggered whispers
float through the distance
ghosts breathe into shadows
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16 comments:
an a kinship to life is a wonderful thing,, and an immediacy once removed cant hurt either... very nicely done.. i think i need a little shaking up like this to bring me back to reality....
Wow. This is so beautiful, it flows so well and has such powerful images. Your writing is always exceptional.
This is very deep. I really like "demise holds an empty threat" -- ain't that the truth.
tumblewords- I always love and Need to read your poems aloud... these flowing musical sounds need to bounce off the air ♥
I never have anything good to say.
Oh well.
It was good.
vivid. perhaps a personal experience of yours. thanks for this inspiring lesson.
It whispered to me as I read it.
beautiful prose
and the fractal fits the images the words created.
This sounds so personal and powerful.
Excellent.
I'm glad to see I'm not the only one to read your poems out loud! This is a cracker.
Powerful ... thank you so much for letting us in ... you move and inspire every time ;)
demise holds an empty threat
fades to the faraway horizon
Amazing use of words..just loved the wordplay
TW, well done. It would seem that we have done a few turns around the floor before daylight. Beautiful.
love-bd
Very deep and lucid.. Loved it
Empowered
We would never know how one thing is important to us until we almost lost. How much more our life, the only one we have.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
Haunting....excellent. I always say the same: I wish I could write like you....
Quiet captivating... really liked it! ;)
Nice fractal as well.
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