Tumblewords

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Friday, March 21, 2008

One or More

Poefusion Friday 5 offers simper, kiss, train, vale and fence for the weekly prompt. My response follows. Feel free to join in the fun!



one simper, a kiss
her departure train
tracks west

he lingers by the fence
cleans all wifely traces
from his gleaming face

the inbound whistle
echoes across the vale
his paramour draws near





6 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Cleans all the wifely traces..

I loved this!

paisley said...

sneaky little bastage!!! very well done!!!!!!

Christine said...

Great work! This guy's a master of train schedules....

Michelle Johnson said...

Tumblewords, your poem is great. But, that guy is one sneaky young man who apparently knows the train schedules well. Have a nice day.

Russell Ragsdale said...

Tumblewords, there is a fabulous feeling of suspense here. I particularly liked the metaphorical waiting by the fence.

OneMoreBeliever said...

oh my.. that was good very good... the words of expression on his face that you conveyed... both sides of the fence... awesome!!.. and the fractals of circles joined, yeah...