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Friday, March 14, 2008

Friday Haiku



For Haiku Friday






sneeze, cough, moan
spring flu bypasses
fall vaccine



indoor greens
lean toward windows
peeking sun



ides of march
usher in snowstorm
browned crocus





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11 comments:

susiej said...

Those poor crocus... and poor you with the flu?!

Joyce said...

Your haiku is spare, yet rich in impressions. I really like it, especially the one about the poor browned crocus.

noahthegreat said...

Ooh. Always a pleasure.

paisley said...

oh that first one was perfection!!!!

Rachel said...

Poor you. I hope you're better soon, that fractal is really fabulous!
Graet haikus.

Michelle Johnson said...

Love your haiku but, the second is my favorite as Springtime is just around the corner. Have a nice night.

LN- Nickers and Ink said...

These were fun to read. You certainly captured this tween-season moment!


Hope you feel better soon!

;-)

Blessings,
Linda

freesherry said...

that was nice.. hope the flu is better now

Rebecca said...

Very nice! :)

Q said...

Good ones!
Sherry

Gift of Green said...

Ha! Loved (hated?) your flu 'ku. You almost made it through flu season! Grrr.