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Friday, March 14, 2008

Friday Haiku



For Haiku Friday






sneeze, cough, moan
spring flu bypasses
fall vaccine



indoor greens
lean toward windows
peeking sun



ides of march
usher in snowstorm
browned crocus





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10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Those poor crocus... and poor you with the flu?!

Joyce said...

Your haiku is spare, yet rich in impressions. I really like it, especially the one about the poor browned crocus.

Anonymous said...

Ooh. Always a pleasure.

paisley said...

oh that first one was perfection!!!!

Rachel said...

Poor you. I hope you're better soon, that fractal is really fabulous!
Graet haikus.

poefusion said...

Love your haiku but, the second is my favorite as Springtime is just around the corner. Have a nice night.

LA Nickers said...

These were fun to read. You certainly captured this tween-season moment!


Hope you feel better soon!

;-)

Blessings,
Linda

freesherry said...

that was nice.. hope the flu is better now

Q said...

Good ones!
Sherry

Gift of Green said...

Ha! Loved (hated?) your flu 'ku. You almost made it through flu season! Grrr.