drawn lines close
on golden mean echoes
as a mobius strip
grows from more to less
split and split again
where once were scores
the longest years now
number on a single hand
phi flings fractals
into a void,
forewarned, he walks
into the gathering black
Surreal is the prompt by Totally Optional Prompts
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in my book surreal is your home turf... this follows suit beautifully... and i am glad to say i only had to look up one word this time... mobius....
very surreal ... and very well done!
Yes, this is surreal indeed, wonderfully done.
hey Tumble, I don't really get it, but I like it. There's something going on there, just out of reach to me, that makes it really intriguing.
Okay, I've read this three times, now, and am still trying to cipher it! I'd have to say it's a success at surrealism! I'm so literal that your last two lines are my favorites; that I can see!
You amaze me with your vision!
Wow, this totally goes over my head!
Love the final sense of "gathering black".
It implies "still creating" ~ quite dramatic!
As usual...........you excel!
Ah, this could mean so many things
I love it. Surreal it is and path he walks melts away.Wonderful.....
-bd
excellent, very surreal
math and a lifetime - both puzzles to solve. I like it.
the picture you hade below was to perfect for this poem. idk how you found the words to make it so sureal and real at the same time
Okay, you lost me on this one - which is, I suppose, the point :-)
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