Poefusion's Friday 5 offered these words: green, snug, snake, boggle, racket. This is a fun meme - feel free to join in...
I attempted my first limerick and came kind of close before I tried a tanka. Obviously, the daily news is getting to me and I couldn't get off topic which is usually easy for me.
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head divider smirks
snug with his own folding green
forked tongue of this snake
spins out another racket ~
maroon's turned to a boggle
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top twisted snake of the packet
so snug in a shameful racket
packs deep pockets with green
his forked tongue boggles me
he has earned a crooked jacket
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i am not posting mine till tomorrow.. but oh number two fits soooo well with my post!!!!!!!
I dislike politics so much I blocked that definition from my mind.. never thought of it.
I really like both of these and the use of the phrase "he has earned a crooked jacket."
I love the second one. And, the line he has earned a crooked jacket is my favorite. You've done a very nice job. Have a nice night.
Ooo, these are good.
Hello there,
I am not sure if you do tags or not, but I have one for you.
http://www.coolchatblog.com/2008/03/8-weird-facts-about-myself.html
Serena
You always find a most creative take on the words! Politics are frustrating- I can't claim to understand that sphere of life. We can only go with our feelings, as your poems here portray.
those fractals are just so creative... find myself looking forward to each one.. of course, your words hi-light the page... this week was another tongue splittin twister...
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