bottle-smooth black ice
deferred stop
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smooth as mango flesh
the sommelier approaches
...one costly bottle
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blanket-smooth landscape
approach of a new blizzard
exit bottle necked
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Prompt words by 3WordWednesday: bottle, smooth, approach
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14 comments:
i live in the bottom of a canyon,, and the black ice is rampant down here,, as we get all the run off... never thought of making a poem of it ...
after i read these 1+3 especially,,, i am so glad i am in cali, and not somewhere that gets snow......
great haiku, of course.
I enjoyed these very much. Thanks for sharing.
I kept going back to "smooth as a mango's flesh" never quite thought of it that way
The third one in particular, evokes a strong image. You need wine with all the coldness and snow. Lovely similes.
having recently been in a wreck (not my fault!) that totaled my car, the black ice one gives me chills.
nice haiku. thanks for stopping by mine!
I think you were greatly influenced by your weather. As much as I love snow, as crazy as the snow has been for mild Western WA, I'm glad I am in Florida; thanks for reminding me. First one is my favorite. Love the picture.
loved all three, hope the weather turns better for you...
I loved the second one..mango smooth..ah!
bag and baggage
Each one of these is a gem, but I loved the middle one-smooth as mango flesh. That's slippery smooth writing!
love them, especially second one.
you do haiku so well
enjoyed all
that black ice, barely visible, very smooth, and oh so dangerous.
Aren't they all costly? :)
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