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Wednesday, January 02, 2008

Button of Luck



I'm still fooling around with American Sentences! Comments welcome...
Prompt words: button, luck, pretend from 3WW



Button up, turn back and pretend you didn't draw luck from that black cat.

Pretend one button of luck merits more than a decade of tough work.




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12 comments:

rwellsrwells said...

Hey Tumble, I like the second one. I know it's not a rule, but I think American sentences should be easily said, and actually sound like something someone might say - not just write.

deathsweep said...

I liked them both!

lissa said...

I like the second one. Interesting graphic/image.

Linda said...

I like the picture you painted in the first one! Nice work!

mariacristina said...

As usual, spare but packed with meaning.

gautami tripathy said...

I like the second one..

Great picture too..

pjd said...

Terrific use of the words to convey big thoughts in small spaces. Not so hard to rearrange slightly to satisfy rwellsrwells:

Button up, turn back, and pretend black cats don't bring bad luck.

Pretend one Luck Button is worth more than a decade of hard work.

Either way, I love the way you worked the words into the concepts.

LittleWing said...

as always..love your spin of words....and the american sentences..have never heard of it previously but have bookmarked to look at later...thank you for introducing a new format..and again, those pics are so interesting..each one is different and intriguing...

TC said...

I really enjoyed the first one.

and yes, I think they should just give us a few weeks off so we can be not as confused ;-)

Brian said...

I like the second one, it reminds me of the lottery fever.

Heather Kathleen said...

i love the second one!!! L.O.V.E. it!

Bone said...

Yes, let's just pretend we didn't see that black cat, and nothing bad will happen :)