I'm still fooling around with American Sentences! Comments welcome...
Prompt words: button, luck, pretend from 3WW
Button up, turn back and pretend you didn't draw luck from that black cat.
Pretend one button of luck merits more than a decade of tough work.
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Wednesday, January 02, 2008
Button of Luck
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Hey Tumble, I like the second one. I know it's not a rule, but I think American sentences should be easily said, and actually sound like something someone might say - not just write.
I liked them both!
I like the second one. Interesting graphic/image.
I like the picture you painted in the first one! Nice work!
As usual, spare but packed with meaning.
I like the second one..
Great picture too..
Terrific use of the words to convey big thoughts in small spaces. Not so hard to rearrange slightly to satisfy rwellsrwells:
Button up, turn back, and pretend black cats don't bring bad luck.
Pretend one Luck Button is worth more than a decade of hard work.
Either way, I love the way you worked the words into the concepts.
as always..love your spin of words....and the american sentences..have never heard of it previously but have bookmarked to look at later...thank you for introducing a new format..and again, those pics are so interesting..each one is different and intriguing...
I really enjoyed the first one.
and yes, I think they should just give us a few weeks off so we can be not as confused ;-)
I like the second one, it reminds me of the lottery fever.
i love the second one!!! L.O.V.E. it!
Yes, let's just pretend we didn't see that black cat, and nothing bad will happen :)
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